Roots n Shoots

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HarryHill
HarryHill
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Exploring the avant-garde ...crawl down
Deep rooted anchored foundations
L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E'd roots of craft, familiar

Deeper

Oh Fuck, I am a bohemian hedonist!
Crawl on

In ancient Egypt I find my name
Astonishment reigns

Look again

To the bottom of the page eyes fall
I'm not in such bad company after all
So crates of writers came before
laying knowledge at my door
yet I find this common root
grew my own tender shoot

(and a lot of water from the poets here)

HarryHill
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demure101demure101over 11 years ago
and bent

on the experiment -

This is something different alright!

kokshurkokshurover 11 years ago
way to go harry.

Stretch the form, or stretch the forum.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E

Look again

and then rhyming couplets that make perfect sense, what are you saying?

anyway this is a reach

Oh Fuck, I am a bohemian hedonist!

I like this:

Crawl on

In ancient Egypt I find my name

Astonishment reigns

chalk it up to a failed experiment, 5ed because it is so bizarre.

shorten the reach

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
USING CRATES OR STACK OR HORDES OR HERD

the truth is still there....there was a bunch. TK U MLJ LV NV

DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago
So crates

that's pretty funny :) The rest of it is too avant garde for me, a simple plebeian.