Autumn

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njoyjade
njoyjade
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Side by side;
our bare legs mold to
the old oak swing
you built years ago.
All is quiet except thoughts;
falling into our minds
after being connected.

Skin on skin;
our bare shoulders rest on
the red flannel shirt
I bought years ago.
All is still except breath;
spiked with cider
we made and perfected.

One on one;
our bare bodies join in
the familiar rhythm
we started years ago.
All is dark except candles;
fragrant with memories
stored and collected.

njoyjade
njoyjade
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DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago

Really lovely. I must get back to the 5 senses challenge - when it works, it really works. This one really works :)

njoyjadenjoyjadeover 11 years agoAuthor
Thank you :)

I appreciate feedback and suggestions. I must give credit to Desejo. This was the result of her words from the five senses challenge.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE ELDER COUPLES

relive their past in the present, TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
i wonder

if this wouldn't be better without

Side by side;

Skin on skin;

One on one;

esp. as lead offs

5ed btw

since that plastic spoon line i've been interested in your writing

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Lovely, this one -

It instils a very tranquil mood - Thank you!