- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Deadlock
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This is the stillness that the years have brought
where shy desire and cold denial breed –
my heart rebelled but my slow brain obeyed
and left the matter pending
in hopeless wonder at all silent thought
that lights your eyes but that I may not read –
no more than ambling clouds and shifting shade
or a low sun descending.
- COMMENTS
Angelineover 11 years agobut whatever it is, it's really seamlessly constructed. There's a lot going on with an economy of words. It's no easy task (imho) to tell so much story with so few, well-chosen words. Impressive!
