Let me hit you.

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Let me hit you
I don't desire your submition
I don't want headgames
I just need your permission

Let me hit you
With hand, belt, or cane
and when we're all done
our love will still be the same

Let me hit you
Not humiliate or defile
I just want to hit you
and bring back your smile

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE MASOCHIST

wins again. TK U MLJ LV NV

Consort_to_the_EmpressConsort_to_the_Empressover 11 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment Ashesh.

I did write them around the same time and looking at them again I can see how they compliment each other. It was entirely coincidental. They were both written from my perspective and I was writing "to" two different people... weird how that happens. :)

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
Let me ......

Is a companion piece to " Beat me "!? Should we read both poems together to get a feel of balance ? Sadism equal'n opposite to masochism .

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