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- naked ankle
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naked ankle
crossing mine
warm hand resting
on my inner thigh
thumb rubs
back and forth
hot breath
against my ear
--prelude--
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ArjayEiffabout 11 years agoprelude
a nice prelude, but I wonder if you could have done something a little different presentationally with the last line. the double dashes jar a little
Desejoabout 11 years agoReally nice, and evocative without being graphic. I am not sure you need the last line. I think this is the best I have seen from you. Well done.
