As Good as a Mile

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demure101
demure101
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We walked the scented garden's dying light,
our feelings rosy and our hearts aglow,
when suddenly we felt our spirits go
as a slow shadow passed into the night:
shy happiness went by, inaudibly…
It wasn’t us that she had come to see.

demure101
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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
5ed

although don't quite share the rosy glow

DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
Powerful little gem!

Well done!

Scheherazade73Scheherazade73about 11 years ago
Wow.

Love this one. Very powerful.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
Brilliant - well done

Smiles S.O.

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Sadness , pathos , poignancy

Cometh alive in thy poetry , o fair Poetess !

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