- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Nightfall
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Over the trees, the sky:
transparent, deep blue,
an evening's stained glass
window.
Dead ahead
one bright star and
slantwise below
the crescent moon, flat
on her back - a pendulum
stuck in the outswing,
a minor seventh ending
to leave you on edge:
a resolution will
not come.
- COMMENTS
DawnJabout 11 years agoI love the images, both visual and aural. I'm particularly struck by " a pendulum
stuck in the outswing", and the idea of the Moon flat on her back is not without intent, I'm sure! Naughty...but nice!
twelveooneabout 11 years agoand you did not hear
the flatted fifth in mine
and correct me with some bullshit about negatives, tsk,tsk
i 5ed anyway
