Letting Go

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Quivering_Quill

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Letting Go

Tears slip from eyes
Cascading over soft skin
Sparkling in the moonlight
Passions sweet surrender

A spiritual woman
Speaking in angelic tongues
Finding her perfect religion
With screams of 'Oh God'

A tsunami sweeps her away
Profanity rages like Turrets
A four letter Soliloquy
Shit, Suck, Fuck, etc.

Spasms of laughter
Radiate from head to toe
Sexual freedom discovered
By simply letting go

An Original Composition by:
Quivering Quill
A Scribbles & Doodles Creation
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erectus123 about 11 years ago

i didn't mind ect with tourettes

very creative, or just forget rhyme and drop etc. this is an example of how nicely you do when there is no pretense of being poetic, well done, descriptive content very good

Quivering_Quill about 11 years agoAuthor

Thanks Harry...

I certainly F'd up on that stanza.... That's what I get for not putting it away and coming back to it.... Thanks, I will correct the original. QQ