- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Mistress Briane makes a demand
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Mistress Briane came to see
men thought they knew it all
they waved their guns and penises
and bragged about their balls
Mistress Briane knew the men well
she watched as they mucked about
war and corruption, rape and pillage
judging and shutting others out
Mistress Briane grew tired
of their developmental state
realized she was the one
who could wrestle them towards fate
Mistress Briane started with a wave
listen to me, men, she said
I am now the one who'll hold the reigns
and watched as they turned red
Mistress Briane didn't care at all
let them fuss and pout and cry
let them make a stink
but truth I will supply
Mistress Briane laid it out for all to hear
Sure you think you're all you need
but I know a this better than you
and this is how we shall proceed
Mistress Briane spoke boldly
you need me to show the way
so open up and share your dreams
your fears I can allay
Mistress Briane watched the men
as her words settled in their brains
would submittal to Briane's demands
they their manliness retain?
Mistress Briane knew the truth
that it takes men and women both
in harmony, hand in hand
to create humanity's growth
Mistress Briane knew the men
would eventually turn to her side
they couldn't resist her goodies
or the chance for a Briane ride.
- COMMENTS
erectus123about 11 years agowe have a dirth of subs here eager to talk about their balls or absence of, although they are still muttering about something or other....
try subbing this for line 4 verse 7 "allow her to hold the reigns" or this"drive them all insane" or " castrate their balls again" that line needs a little something
who could=to
"or the chance for a Briane ride" there is the sexy part, suggested, tempting, control through sex, maybe a little more tit-ilation is needed but nicely done
twelveooneabout 11 years agopunctuation on the first line
Mistress Briane came to see:
either/or
since you have it elsewhere, clear up the confusion
twelveooneabout 11 years agoyup, me to a tee
but what do I know?
men thought they knew it all
where that?
and rest could use a little more proofing, editing and rethinking
BWTF fived
