Your Breath

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susansnow
susansnow
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I walked toward the door looked down and there the universe caved. Several men at once are better than none I guess. I could have lived well in the seventies. I am not above prostitution. Our society condones whatever pays. I only want to see your face. I wonder if the woman with the ivy broke your heart. I know nothing. I fight ravenous desire. I fight impulse after impulse then just sit around and eat bad food. The scream that swallows. I discovered the wolf inside the lamb's coat. Your breath doesn't even smell the same.

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twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 11 years ago
not a fan of block o'text

except for the last line. this one sinks a bit into the cliche

didn't vote

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionalmost 11 years ago
nice prose poem

Pithy and to the point and all the more powerful for that - good stuff. S.O.