Weeping Angel

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Weeping Angel

I met a Weeping Angel;
I could'nt avert my eyes.

I fell in love with her,
and proclaimed it to the skies.

I would've spent my life with her,
nestled twixt her thighs.

I would've made sweet love to her,
and filled the heavens with her sighs.

But a man can't be perfect,
no matter how hard he tries.

In jealousy, I doubted her,
and believed the devil's lies.

Rashly, I spoke, and wounded her,
and now, me, she doth despise.

Forever my dream's now gone from me,
it should come as no surprise.

I tried to hold her to me,
but, there were no longer any ties.

Now, I'm on my knees, begging heaven,
for a chance to apologize.

I want to beg her for forgiveness,
and look into her eyes.

Hoping against hope,
that true love never dies.

I hurt my weeping angel,
so now I'm the one who cries.

Is there any hope for love,
from ashes to arise?

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dudeinlovedudeinlovealmost 11 years ago
Literal

I expected something else. This was literal. Nice though.

mandm06mandm06almost 11 years ago
Strong

Strong end rhymes. Nicely put together. We like it.

bluejeansjellybeansbluejeansjellybeansalmost 11 years ago
Your Style

I like your writing style and your illustrations, especially the tiger.

aceintheholeperryaceintheholeperryalmost 11 years ago

Nice symmetry in your stanzas

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