- Erotic Poetry
- On Good Girls Who Say "No!"
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Good Girls Who Say "No!"
A poem for good girls
who say,"No!"
Then give it away for free
While those of us who paid with love
End up with cock-slots empty
Like the pockets of a vagrant tramp
We leave the field of battle
While someone else their cunts will tamp
And ride full in their saddle
That's why I've always loved the whores
With a ticket for admission
They need a price to pay for life
To allows us their submission
They tell no lies of virgin play
They simple state: "I'm fucking today"
"I fucking right now, call me back"
"You have to pay to feel my rack"
"Of course I'll blow your lovely cock"
"Just pay the price I'll never stop"
"Until you fill my mouth with cum
I stick my finger in your bum"
Oh yes, I do adore the sluts
Who turn so I can fuck their butts
Or fulfill the urge for a vagina surge
There are those who offer up
Any orifice for you to fuck
God bless all the whores on earth!
Let them find a better berth
On the couch with kings and dukes
Out of the gutter where punk drunks puke
Send the bitching lying virgin scum
Who play with us and use their thumb
To wet our interest and then say "No!"
I pray them all to hell they go
Where devils will sew their clits up tight
So they will piss with horrific fright
Likewise sew up their useless ass
So none can fuck'em face down on grass
Deny them all our bountiful cocks
Let them watch from dungeons locked
How we take joy in fucking fems
Yet we will never fuck them again
- COMMENTS
todski28almost 11 years agoTies in with my poem on masculinity. If he had not listened to social doctrines by trying to buy her favours and actually tried to seduce her as a man then he wouldn't be in the dreaded friend zone, watching other men plunder the depths that he feels should have been his. At least if the price is right a prostitute won't say no.
erectus123almost 11 years agoAuthorDante put seducers in the 8th circle which he divided into 10 sections and added prostitutes who had used their sex to steal or do harm
erectus123almost 11 years agoAuthorI guess the protagonist (a rather furious young man) is so sick of unwilling teasing virgins (obviously one in particular) and so pleased with whores that he has reversed conservative societal values opting for free love or if not that, then paid love. This is a viewpoint of one who like Dante fell in love and never tasted his sweet Beatrice in the flesh. Fortunately for Dante he didn't see her ravaged by one who didn't love her at all. Of course anyone who mentions hell owes an enormous debt to Dante, believe me he is much better read in Italian then English but the Gustave Dore etchings are always a great accompaniment. Thanks for your comments!
hipeeps72almost 11 years agoI really enjoyed this poem . It had a nice flow and read well. After reading this poem I thought of Dante's Inferno and the nine circles of Hell. Which one are the virgins condemned too? I am thinking number eight. At that level the punishment seems to fit but seems like a place for the whores rather than virgins.
