Approaching old age

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Cracking joints;
a chrysalis opens.

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TzaraTzaraover 10 years ago
Congratulations on the E, m'dear.

My version would be:

Cracking joint.

My orthopedist opens

his checkbook.

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
Yup you deserved it!

in just a few words you told a story that is also a metaphor. Excellent! :-)

NeonuroticNeonuroticover 10 years ago
Really, a brilliant comparison

With a well deserved E and easy to 5.

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
You old butterfly you

:)