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How you become wet,
as if you were wax
and I flame.
Or you are ocean
and I a swimmer, submerged.
Or that water is Life.
2.
Your muffled cries
bitten into the pillow,
knuckles white, grasping the sheet.
3.
The scent of sleep
on your body at dawn.
A wonderful little trio that is spare but rich with sensuality. I'd end the first one at "flame" as I think it would balance the poem better, but I'm quibbling because it's all really good. Thanks for sharing it. :-)
....for three. Simple yet spot on! The final line in the first poem could go, in fact just the first verse alone would suffice,