Three Little Poems About Love

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1.
How you become wet,
as if you were wax
and I flame.

Or you are ocean
and I a swimmer, submerged.

Or that water is Life.

2.
Your muffled cries
bitten into the pillow,
knuckles white, grasping the sheet.

3.
The scent of sleep
on your body at dawn.

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AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
What Tristesse said

A wonderful little trio that is spare but rich with sensuality. I'd end the first one at "flame" as I think it would balance the poem better, but I'm quibbling because it's all really good. Thanks for sharing it. :-)

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
Five....

....for three. Simple yet spot on! The final line in the first poem could go, in fact just the first verse alone would suffice,

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