- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Cannot be
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drunken words
land with a thud
dug from the depths of subconscious
spewed out
fall heavy on paper
dragged down
pen pressed
ink soaks through
absorbed deep
but not as deep
as words
that cannot be
unwritten
- COMMENTS
todski28over 10 years agoOn acid, I'm sure you'd get some interesting imagery ;-)
Not a bad little experiment lol
Final stanza is the true meat the rest is gravy though as ash said, not very good gravy.
On a side note thanks for the time you put in posting comments it is time consuming and the feedback often inspires new writers to stay. Ashesh and Erectus123 are the main reason I stayed
LesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthorIt was more writing about being angry when drunk then actually writing while drunk and angry. I'm actually a pretty happy drunk.
I agree, not my best stuff but I'm challenging myself to write everyday, and they can't all be winners I guess lol!
Oldbear63over 10 years agoAre you always an unhappy drunk? Words that come from the subconscious are usually valid - and maybe need to get out there...
Ashesh9over 10 years agonature of the drunken mind prevents the writin' from reachin' ur usual levels of excellence : sorry
LesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthorSoooo, I wrote this while drunk, and I thought I titled it 'drunken words' not sure I like the title, sounds so dark.
