The Critic

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She laughs at the words that I submit -
“You really are a romantic old twit,
You can’t write of our love as there you sit
And not just because of a lack of wit,
There simply aren’t the right words for it”
Damn. She's right.

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LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Lol! Can any love really be defined or does it need to be experienced to be understood?

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