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Click hereYour eyes need not be open for me,
sleep while hands rove over body,
examining each roll and fold and plane of you,
clefts and crevices, hollows of hips,
lips open for a questing finger that lingers for a bit,
tracing that ruby gateway, pauses, travels,
caresses hair away from ear, examines neck and nape,
little massage touches returning to line of jaw,
fine bone triangle that arches back, exposes neck.
all intention of long slow torture/pleasure is lost in the sight, mouth lowers to search from collar bone to ears,
that hollow just past your jaw,
hand slips to nether lips, enters, explores,
implores a pearl to become a sun and when dawn breaks at last.
I can take no more and sink into your day.
porn poppy (nether lips, etc.)
this line:
implores a pearl to become a sun and when dawn breaks at last.
is surely a line to run with
if fact some of the things you do come up with would make me jealous....
...if i was a writer
IN RE YOUR "WORDS POEM" THE TVE HAD ON A PERV WHO TOOK ADV ANTAGE OF PASSED OUT LADIES. ASSUMING THE CONSENUAL OKness OF THIS ACT THE POEM IN ITSELF HAD CONNOTATIONS AND ENTENDRES, OVERALL IT WAS GOOD. I CHOSE NOT TO PUT THESE INTO THE REALM OF OPENESS FOR ALL. RESPECTFULLY TK U MLJ LV NV
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The two people in this poem are lovers, one is awake the other merely asleep, apologies if anyone thought this was non consensual, would make a good point to put in a pre-nuptial, 'both parties agree to free use of their bodies while asleep.' idk
enjoyed the whole journey, but the final lines were, well - sheer poetry.
all of it, the fluidity, sound-links that tie it together throughout, simply stated imagery, a building of quiet tension/passion - but the pinnacle resides in those final lines:
implores a pearl to become a sun and when dawn breaks at last.
I can take no more and sink into your day.
it doesn't get any better than that, harry. omg x