- Non-Erotic Poetry
- crazy person
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the words you're using are knives to my ears
your lips armored by lies and fears
don't touch my face, you don't deserve my tears
i just went out for a couple of beers
i understand, for you, it's hard to trust
relationships lose that when based on lust
please try for me, if you love me, you must
stop yelling at me, i don't like to be cussed
get your hand off my arm, i'm calling the cops
black eye, swollen cheek, another tear drops
i still love you even after this stops
insanity in your eyes and my stomach flops
being dragged by my hair out into the dark
tied up to a tree, blood dripping down bark
my vision is blurring, i recognize this park
you took me here once, the memory is stark
shining through the haze, i remember that day
you asked me for words i was hesitant to say
you reeled me in before i could spirit away
i confessed to a lie that was true today
i think what i see is a knife in your hand
you're sobbing as you try to help me understand
there's no other way, your heart can't withstand
a blow like before, this wasn't what you had planned
it'll be over soon, is there anything i'd like to add
yes dear, i love you, and don't be so sad
when you wake up tomorrow you won't remember being mad
at a girl you made up and never really had
- COMMENTS
ch3mical_r3nt_boyabout 9 years agoWhat a fun ride this poem was. We start off having beer and end up tied to a tree with blood dripping down the bark. bravo!
Tsothaabout 10 years ago"i still love you even after this stops"
My thought: impossible!
"at a girl you made up and never really had"
My thought: Oh, ok. Now it makes sense. :-)
painful_raptureabout 10 years agoAuthorI'm pretty sure a raptor is a bird, which is far from rapture, lol.
As for how I felt while writing this, it's just make believe, so don't worry :)
I just watch too much television, and this is a mish-mash of shows I've watched mixed up into a poem. I'm actually a very happy person. Thank you for reading my poems and commenting on them, I really do appreciate it,
<3
painful_rapture
Ashesh9about 10 years agoshocking !?! you do Not have to put up with this & as a Poem this conveys your angst , anguish , sheer terror !
