- Non-Erotic Poetry
- You Make Me Feel
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You make me feel
Like I'm not as broken
As I thought I was
You make me feel
Like I am brave
Enough to face my demons
You make me feel
Like I am beautiful
Even with my scars
You make me feel
Like I am strong
Enough to overcome anything
- COMMENTS
Oldbear63almost 10 years agoexpressed so nicely. Brave enough to face your demons, little one
Matryoshkaalmost 10 years agoThis is a nice poem. Just two suggestions to possibly improve the flow of the poem:
> Switch the second and third set of lines around - this shows the progression and links one to another
> move the word 'enough, up to the previous line - where it is now there is emphasis on it implying "just enough to get by" instead of what is accomplished
Very heartfelt and I connected with the poem more than you could imagine. Thank you for sharing it.
