- Non-Erotic Poetry
- 1 trick poney by loastandfounder
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This just sucks
(so?)
Obviously no effort
(define "effort")
or thought
(define "thought")
(like your thoughtful efforts
shakespeare?)
Like a dog whimpering
to be let out
(your so fucked up,
you think its me
that's in the cage
whimpering,
so there)
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoSuck-cess so elusive ~ new thoughts so rare - in a cage of uncreativity...new and better days ahead.
lostandfounderover 19 years ago(So?)-You've got a valid point. Who cares if I think it sucks?
(define "effort")- Something that I've seen you use in your writings that shows you are capable of more than this
(define "thought")- What you seem to be afraid of.
(like your thoughtful efforts shakespeare?)- I'm a poor critic, especially of my own work so I can't say much to this :)
(your so fucked up...so there)- We all live in our own little self imposed cages. So there.
