- Non-Erotic Poetry
- 98' Eyes Can Tell
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Click hereWhen you see me.
You see a loner.
Unafraid and uncaring.
You see someone
Tough without showing.
The shadows unknowing.
When you look in my eye's
You see time has taken it's toll.
The blankness is a cover.
A lid a top of the pain,
For no one to see.
For the self-control
That I keep
You call me cold.
A rock.
But yet so weak.
And only,
The eye's can tell.
-- Jessi --
- 7/10/98 -
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoUnder control ~ except for the eyes. When it comes to understanding - only the eyes have it ~ and betray.
LeBrozover 17 years agoAnother piece with issues of plurals, possessives, & contractions;
Seems to have improved in later years.
