tagNon-Erotic Poetrya grumpy old man

a grumpy old man


a grumpy old man
chastised the young checkout chick
she rolled his melon a bit too hard
and passed the eggs too roughly
no eggs were broken
the tuna survived inside its tin grave

and even though he took his complaint
to the pimple faced assistant
I doubt anyone cared
just another grumpy old man
caring around scars for 70 years
with a need to vent his pain

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