a grumpy old man

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WriterDom
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a grumpy old man
chastised the young checkout chick
she rolled his melon a bit too hard
and passed the eggs too roughly
no eggs were broken
the tuna survived inside its tin grave

and even though he took his complaint
to the pimple faced assistant
I doubt anyone cared
just another grumpy old man
caring around scars for 70 years
with a need to vent his pain

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
AND THOSE PAINFUL YEARS

are forever etched in his psyche, TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
never happy.

What a brilliant insightful rendering. So reminiscent of life of older folk. One can almost picture the grumpy old guy from the Poet's description.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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There is nothing like dealing directly with those customers who, no matter what you do, will always find reason to complain.

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