- Erotic Poetry
- A Lonely Girl
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So what's a lonely girl to do
when love comes knocking at her door?
I cannot get enough of you.
And though I doubt your love is true
it only makes me want you more,
so what's a lonely girl to do?
When making love I've learned anew
precisely what my body's for -
I cannot get enough of you.
Everything but pleasing you
in every sense is just a chore,
so what's a lonely girl to do?
Now all the things you like to do
are all the things I most adore -
I cannot get enough of you.
You ask if I've a girlfriend who
would like to play 'un jeu d'amour',
so what's a lonely girl to do?
It's only as you watch us screw
I see that I've become your whore
But I can't get enough of you,
So what's alonely girl to do?
What's a lonely girl to do?
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoDamn you, I'm going to have to read all your poems now.
You've quite some talent. :-D
LeBrozabout 18 years agoAn easy read,
Repetition's not excessive
Rhyme is not forced;
Again, well done.
f-cynyrabout 18 years agothe comment below, very nice rhythm and cadence. nice poem to read.
LuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years agoThis is the first time I have read your work...and I absolutely loved it! Its rythmical pattern and easy flow did not feel pushed or stretched and unlike some others I have read your use of rhyme and stanza did not cause the wording to be clumsy or make it lose its focus or flow in anyway...
Overall it was wonderful and very true to life! :)
