- Non-Erotic Poetry
- a thrush (Haiku)
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a thrush
a snail -
dinner
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoI don't know -
If I must choose then
I guess with snail on the menu
It's time to start on a diet.
Maria2394about 18 years agoi could write haiku. I cannot. I am glad you can. Pooor thrush, have you no tasty crickets down there? :D
My Erotic Trailabout 18 years agothe original poems of japan and zen are based soely on facts without human emotion or thoughts added. This poem fits that style of writing perfectly, allowing the reader to fill in the blanks or accept what is, reality.
TheRainManabout 18 years ago...but I agree with Eve - not the desired impact. The vision is a bit too perfect to hold the moment of thrill and understanding you are trying to achieve in the reader in this haiku phase you are going through.
No comparison to your most early ones though. Far more advanced now.
