After the Affair

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vrosej10
vrosej10
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it's eight am, our second day-night together post Jenna
he's still got bed-head and the newspaper;
I scoop up my purse, headed for to work
then at the door I remember, turn, 'I love you'
without looking up he says 'I love you too, Susan'
'who's Susan?'

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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Isn't this why men call women darling?

bogusagainbogusagainabout 13 years ago
Don't..

..you just hate it when that happens!

I love these little poems, they take me back to the pop poets of the 60s. Minute slices of life revealing the tragi-comic nature of our mundane existence.

fridayamfridayamabout 13 years ago
I love your poems

but this felt too personal, too--what, who, where? Why? Wherefore? You get the picture:) It's personal but also obscure, you know? x

AngelineAngelineabout 13 years ago
Little slices of life

are so telling. I think you could get more from it with different line breaks but I always think that. And one nitpick: a typo in line three. Really good though: says a lot with few words.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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Susan must be your pet name. Always pays to rename your lovers.

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