Aftertouch

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Liar
Liar
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this is
what an aftertouch
is to a symphony

barely noticed
in the storm
of what was

this is
lingering resonance
nine hundred
nanoseconds
in duration
but saying everything
that was ever spoken
in one final exhale

when commotion
was cut sharp
into the loudest
silence ever heard

this is
your face
relaxing after
exciting expression
exercise to sink
back into stillness
almost closed eyes
skin so unstrained

brushing your
still parted lips
against mine

this is
your voice
a soft moaning sigh
in sharp contrast
to the hollering high
that seconds ago
filled the room
and my mind

that uneloquent
chanting exploding
tonight

this is
so much more
than my still
hammering heart
trying to lower
the pulse

as powerless
we exhale
and sink softly
onto ourselves
and welcome
the aftertouch
of a symphony

for now
 

Liar
Liar
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Totally seductive

Exquisite writing perfectly descriptive of the aftermath of a wonderful sensuous interlude. Perfection.

BooMerengueBooMerengueabout 20 years ago
!

This is beyond wonderful; and the reason I know I will never be a true Wordsmith. Thank you, Liar... I love it!

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
Just beautiful...

this is written with such observation and specificity. The way it moves neatly from one observation to the next keeps it from falling into hyperbole (an easy thing with a poem on a topic like this), but in the hands of this articulate poet it is as subtle and delicate as lace. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
wonderful

Just beautiful! He makes describing the undescribable look easy.

ssong

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Aaaah!!

The perfect juxtapose - symphonic music and love making works so well in this delicate poem. Moving and lyrical.