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- Al·Gharb·4
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4.
The nights
they feed on the excessive light of day
As if a ray of sun had been
left forgotten
across the metallic plains
of the south
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LeBrozabout 17 years ago~~
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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LeBrozover 18 years ago~~
pleasantly surprised by your work here;
the juxtaposition of image and imagery
Anonymousover 18 years agoOK
My least favorite so far. Not as original nor as innovative as the previous ones.
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