- Non-Erotic Poetry
- All Up Shook
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Click hereWell blessa my britches I’m a piece of meat,
And I can’t seem to stand on maown three feet,
She make me crazy so I wet the sheet,
And just look: I’m all up shook.
I’m obsessed with a girl who won’t ‘cess me back,
I seem just can’t to brain my put on track,
I’m a bird in the yard and lightning smokestack,
And just look: I’m all up shook.
She’s on my mind all night and day
But how do I get into her plans?
I don’t wanna be bitter. Should I just find another?
All I do is stumble when I look for a woman.
- COMMENTS
swallowedscreamabout 16 years agoJust straight up, made me grin, loved it! Loved the word play and the..haha..bet you thought I was gonna say THAT turn...as in "But how do I get into her plans?" A fun read, for a not so fun feeling when wanting someone is making you crazy because sadly, they don't want you back. Thanks for the great read! I REALLY needed that smile, someone has me a bit "up shook" myself. ~S.S./D/Cheese *wink*
