An Afternoon of Sometimes

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Angeline
Angeline
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A woman closes a door.
You can’t see
what’s behind it, maybe
a room or an ocean
of chaos, pages, leaves
torn from books thrown.
A woman

closes
a door and opens
a window. The Sun shines,
leaves have collided green
whispers the afternoon
has passed
a woman

closes a book, distant
traffic nearly
tells the time she hears
and looks down to the ticking
leaves the room,
a woman

closes a door.

Angeline
Angeline
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ishtatishtatabout 4 years ago
More than twice

I had never read this before so I did so - several times. Mysterious and beautifully composed

MyZenTrailMyZenTrailabout 13 years ago
Literary Art

diversity tickles the muse

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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I hope you don't mind, but I think you will understand, I had to go away from this for a while. Think things over see how much I liked it and it has drawn me back to read anew and appreciate just how good it is

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 13 years ago
So cleverly structured

and beautifully delivered. S.O.

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