Black Girl

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I’m courting me a black girl,
dark eyed and thick hipped.
She kisses like
clover honey.
I’ll wrap her around me
hot and sweet
and forget
everything but her breath
against my cheek
and her heartbeat around my hand.

I’m gonna
kiss the base of her neck
where she smells like sunlight,
skin hot and pliable.
Damp and salty with sweat,
she tastes like sea side taffy.
I can’t help but bite.

I will
make her a sweet grass ring,
talk her into laying down
in calf high clover,
so I can touch her secrets
and breath her in.
She is dark as growing soil
where all good things take root.
Damp, wet and rich,
I’m going to plant me deep,
and sigh in the beauty of her.

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
#2 PRETTY LITTLE PEARL

open her up and see whats inside, TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
FINDING A PERSON YOU LIKE AND CARE ABOUT

except for societies mores, please yourself, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Lovely

Soft and warm but with the sizzle of passion underneath.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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A more romantically sensuous than hard edge erotic piece. I saw Eve's review on this and I see what she means about some spots needy a tweak. I think, for example, that in the next to last line that, "plant me deep" is almost predictable; I'd leave out the pronoun and just have it read, "plant deep," but that's just me.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
Highly sensual

I liked the sensuality which coexisted here with the love that clearly came across...perhaps more like adoring.

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