Breaking Stuff at the Smash Shack

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I want a drink, and then a plate or vase
Or heart to hurl against their steel back wall.
What I want is shards, the thin ones that cut

When you walk over them, Miranda. Cut
The way you cut me out, like an old vase
Of unbecoming form. I was a wall,

Bricks laid with affection, but yet a wall
Laid in the way of your ambition. Cut
Through me, baby—I'm your brittle glass vase,

Your shattered vase, your broken wall. Yeah. Cut.

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JamesCiriacoJamesCiriacoalmost 15 years ago
Excellent Use of Form

This is wonderful. You've woven your metaphors and your end words gracefully together into a moment of ire that cuts both ways. Really enjoyed it.