breathing the chalice

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falling to the side

at first:
the long breath
drawn inside of
fires and blood....


kneeling at the sides

...and then arriving
once more
at the sharp corners
waiting to pinch
waiting to allude
waiting to shape:

flooding the ceilings

words are faltering
and then rising
devouring each song
one by one by one by one
forgetting references
forgetting reason
forgetting nirvana and
kingdoms

shimmering smaller

while your mouth
opens and invokes


the lasting ceremony
beneath my closed eyes.

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LiarLiarabout 20 years ago
erotic indeed

It is hard to take a theme as this and not make it cheap and tachy. This is sensual, smart and loaded.

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Sucking the snake

Religious ceremony or blowjob. . .

or both. . .

Are you a priest?

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
at first

I thought of the chalice the rastas use,,

This has a great feeling/ mood to it

dark smokey rooms where ancient rites are held.

Very nice

echoes_sechoes_sabout 20 years ago
Reminds me

of hot wax and writings in knife on skin and sensations it draws out...very beautiful

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