- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Call This the World
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Click hereCall This the World
By SilentMercy
Call this prose
It's none of my fucking business what you call it
I'm just writing it
And you can publish it if you want to
Call this stupid
It's not my problem
It's yours
And you can own it or let it go
Call this meaningless
It may well be
But it fills a hole in my life
And it is there to fill a hole in yours
Call this the world
That's all it is
Just the world on the computer
When you won't notice the trees
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 13 years agoI gave you a 5, you can delete the comment, if you wish. From here on out I am just sampling , you just got lucky.
What I can call it is rather pointless, as I am capable of
"And it is there to fill a hole in yours"
doing it myself, or digging one if you prefer.
I find the slighting aggrieved indifference to the reader annoying. The poem, is not about you, it is for the reader.
Now here is what is good; the last two lines do a nice turn.
