Capricorn

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The Greeks get all the credit for our sky
but, as on Earth, a little dig
yields older bones.
The stars meant something in Sumer too
in first cities
rising from rivers.

Half goat, half fish—what the fuck?
Caprice? No. It's Enki,
Lord of Nudimmud—of making--
and of mischief when
cooking Men from clay
was all the rage amongst Gods.

The goat-fish was King in a
land of mud where
Ziggurats at least kept
your feet dry,
where wet earth was
pierced by first pen.

There was so much water Enki thought
it would be fun to have more,
a flood to float his thoughts on
Man's evanescence,
watching his buildings
sink back into mud.

Babel is gone, Sumer no more,
Eridu smitten with weapons.
The sky has moved, taken the old Goat
down a peg or two—but
he's still Enki and he will
surprise you yet.

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7 Comments
tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
PEOPLE WITH VISION

of past and futures are never suprised TK U MLJ LV NV

PoetGuyPoetGuyabout 13 years ago
Another really good poem in this series.

Poet Guy's one quibble would be with the WTF, which seems out of place in an otherwise elegant poem. The line "a flood to float his thoughts on" is superb.

ishtatishtatabout 13 years ago
!

En-Hedu-Ana would appreciate you ,as do I!

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years ago
This line

Half goat, half fish—what the fuck?

Caprice? No. It's Enki,

Lord of Nudimmud—of making--

and of mischief when

cooking Men from clay

was all the rage amongst Gods.

is so frickin cool. I mean pee in panties cool.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
WTF

never thought I'd love the zodiac so much. You really know how to bring the star clutter down to earth.

Yeah A real 5

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