Car Trouble


Thanks to the green chevy at the light last night

I was stuck in a rut on the side of the road,
and then you came along
and rescued me.

You stroked your pedal
 and revved up your engine
My high beams lit up
 and I flashed you a view
you grabbed your gear shift
and went into overdrive

 I asked you to jump me,
 and you obliged
when you clamped my terminal
 my battery sparked
 when we  hit the gas  together
my engine began to flood

 your charge ran through me
until you were drained
we idled together
 as we recharged

 Then with me in your blind spot
 we cruised  on down the road.

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