Caramel Suite

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Angeline
Angeline
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Sun up down. Oh. You
know you can melt me
in day turns of twilit pouts,
lily soft I churn under

that flame, buttery sizzled
across your moveable feast.
I glaze smoky brushed, shining
the first notes of desire slide

to tingle open-mouthed.
Breathless. Yes. Lips ply
succulent promises. Heated
silken limbs twitch and ride

the simmer, the breaking sea
chorus moans, bubble bubble
caramel consumed. Sweet skin
burns cool waves fading timbre.

Angeline
Angeline
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15 Comments
tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ITS SWEETER FOR THE EATER

calories not withstanding. TK U MLJ LV NV

SappholoversSappholoversalmost 20 years ago
Cresting

Intriguing poem. The opening lines had allure but confused me some....made me hesitate as I read. But I loved the way the poem ended. It had me remembering summer vacation time at the NJ shore when, in my mid-adolescence, I was so often swelling and cresting with desire. Favorite line: "Heated silken limbs twitch and ride."

poetboy824poetboy824almost 20 years ago
yummy

yummy as always

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Silky smooth

...and sexy as Hell - or Heaven. Beauty!

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Burnt Sugar Blues

Once more with wonderment.

Excellent on several metaphoric levels.

I like the way you initially tie your music predilection into this one with the title's play on words.

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