ceremonious

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2rivers
2rivers
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shape and size
your hair falling across your mouth
eating it, not caring
a condiment for your feast,
roughage

sometimes laying for it
other times pulling, grabbing, throwing
masked affirmations against brick,
straw bale, rammed earth walls

physical answer
constantly missing things that would have changed my life
upset all the factors in my life, let them all know about the others
throw them all in the air and watch to see which ones scramble,
cling to my seeing eye stabbing cane
not in church with three tier pipes
foot pedals loaned out to local jazz ack ack blues junkies
making the worlds turn and flow and jig

notice the forever hum
best felt during completeness

2rivers
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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Quite a mix from her eating her hair to the sounds of jazz & blues.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Quite a mix from her eating her hair to the sounds of jazz & blues.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
The longer

lines seem a bit of a departure for you. A bit different but just as enthralling. Something about your wording amazes me. I'd copy you if I could, but dammit I can't...

jim :)

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