- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Chrysalis
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If only I could change my shape, and stay
all winter wrapped in some hard skin until
at last spring drove me out, and, dazed at first,
and hungry, with a painful winter's thirst,
I'd go out in the world to have my fill
and try those bright new wings, and fly away.
- COMMENTS
LesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoBut those moments through winter you miss are part of life as well...even if they are hard to face...
twelveooneover 10 years agoby Ash, is specific. 5ed, but how old this? Is the fact that this is a Chrysalis, instead of hibernation new enough?
L2 nice. But it looks like a sleepwalk, outside of the rhyme scheme. That said, I am glad to see comments on yours, hope some newer writers can learn from you, Disagree? I'd love to hear it.
Also consider the ratio, of what you have to say in your poetry, versus comments on others.
Oldbear63over 10 years agoBeautiful use of words and structure to catch the sentiment. But I need to write you one of winter...
Ashesh9over 10 years agoif a mirror is kept between 3rd. 'n 4th. line it's like a symmetry !!
