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Allyourbase
Allyourbase
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You're not my friend
tonight, you're nothing
like you are by day
and I like it.

I'm not your friend
tonight, I'm everything
that should ever matter
and you want it.

We're in love and war
tonight. I make demands
that hurt your knees
and bruise your mind.

I make you shut up, look up, open up,
yield to me though I'm unkind, surrender
whatever it is you were guarding this time.
Whichever part of you is tender,
you know that it is mine. Admit:

There is no escape,
because you don't want there to be.
Resist all you want, you belong to me.

Allyourbase
Allyourbase
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KurokamiKurokamiabout 13 years ago
I know I just commented on the other one too, but...

This is the kind of writing that makes me feel bad about my own. Poetry isn't usually my thing, but I'm glad I made a point of reading the two you've submitted. They're pretty damn great.

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years ago
Ouchy

the first stanza sets a harsh tone.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
Several.....

....cuts above the average M/s poem found in here.

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