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Click herezen is a rainbow
after a rain
from blue skies
filled with white clouds
over a green forest
filled with colorful flowers
and multi colored animals
zen is the blackness
when one closes their eyes to meditate
and the red in ones cheeks
when anger comes to life
and the color of blood
spilt from wars
and the grey from clouds
that bellow over battle fields
zen is the color of everything
for everything is zen
like a black stone
buried on a white sand beach
you may not be able to see it
but it is there
as the color of absence
and I haven't much else to add other then I like how you connected each stanza with color from rainbow to zen black and white. Nice work!
this is the best poem of yours I have ever read. I have no suggestions except MORE!!! :)
~ maria