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Click hereFrangipani blooms in bright colored lei’s
Crown the princesses head on hot summer days
In grass so green ten bare footed toes
Dance to an unheard tune where’er she goes
The princess of light.
From the deepest, darkest, depths of Hell
There rises a passion to surge and swell
Riding Lucifers stallion reckless in speed
Harnessing power deep is his need
For the princess of light
Inside she is silent, the radiant sun long past set
She kneels before the doorway most true and faithful pet
Body all a tremble, fuelled by most wicked of thought
She hears the low rumble, chest flames, her breath is caught
By the Master of the Dark
Door opens, cool breeze, fire burning in his eyes
A hand beckons, a word barks, she meekly complies
Unleashing the demons within, feeling furious heat
To assuage his blackened soul her submission so complete
Her Master of the Dark
Pain laden sweat soaked bodies glide rhythmically as one
Deeply, deeply, thrusts his soul she glows the heat of the sun
Moan, cry, scream, my princess, again and again my love,
For you cannot stay in the darkness, yours is the light above
My princess of dark light
dark light, however
Unleashing the demons within, feeling furious heat, blackened soul are just a little too expected, and Damn that first line is good,
am curious as regards punctuation, looks intermittent
5ed
make rhyme, reason and sense...Is it rap????TK U MLJ LV NV
I like your use of rhyme, which gives this a singsong quality. You have also obviously given thought to the structure. Quibbles: lei's should read leis. It does look weird, but lei's is just wrong. Barefooted not bare footed. Lucifer's. But overall, I enjoyed this.
making jealousy those who live the other. TK U MLJ LV NV