Dark Ride

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f-cynyr
f-cynyr
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I found the promise
that branded your skin
as you shoved through the mist,
and rain.
Those were the days of walking
and
endless time,
when even whispers
lingered on the air and lips
and
body parts.

When the madness that I
carried in my pocket,
was freely shared,
when the blood racing was
important
and the chest hammering
was a
Friday occurrence and
the edge water crept
closer and closer.
I lost my sight that drooling night
when we spoke
names and spells,
hoping to capture
the elusive
and snare the faith that
would free our flesh.

But even lips tremble
on this dark ride and
the passing of days,
unbeknownst to hands
and caldron eyes, spool
away, with no regard of
return.

With the sea surging
in my vision,
the ocean selkie was you,
the tides ebbed
and with the tide
we traveled from
water to memory.

Surviving the name choosing
and changing
that captured us,
froze us until
there were the entrails of prophecies
that we shared,
each
devouring it piece by piece.

Just before dawn,
bits of abandoned
night dissolve on tongue and
lips as the dark whispers into
our flesh,
and we
tumbled and shook
on this dark ride, till
we awoke.


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normal jeannormal jeanover 14 years ago
wonderful!

Your poem caused several emotions and reactions. It is well written, no errors to correct right off. I totally enjoyed this poem. well done!!!

hugs,

NJ

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 18 years ago
Sensational ~!!!

I loved this poem. A ride one cannot easily forget it seems. Very erotic, sensual, and hot imagery. The flow is rough yet, timeless just sensational wording. You my friend, are a true poet. Of the heart, mind and senses ~

Adding this one to my Fav list ~!!!

More Please~

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Enjoyed

the ride

thanks for sharing

TT

MayhemLassMayhemLassalmost 18 years ago
your work is certaintly not

always easy to embrace and understand - I had to read this several times - I found the imagry provoking and powerful - the emotions engendered troubling ... I'm going to have to muse on it a big more - but the view from your perspective is always fascinating.