Dawn # 2

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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 10/28/2022
Created 03/04/2012
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demure101
demure101
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The red of sunrise lies, a bloodied veil,
on long night's stupor. On the smooth canal
the boat lies motionless; nobody stirs

to cast it from its moorings. In the trees
night's silence rests unchallenged. There's no bird
that sings to hail another morning; dense

dull-copper leaves create a tunnel where
the shade of slumber reigns. A shabby dog
lies, head upon its paws, beside the grey

adobe hut, gone grimy through the years
of constant use. The door's ajar. Inside
near-darkness dims the reds and ochres of

old Charon's bedclothes. On the sleepy bank
I contemplate the trip that will release
me from life's mad pursuits and bring me peace.

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
mining

mining

mining

the same old depths of hell, what new

i think i fived it, shame changed my mind

The red of sunrise lies, a bloodied veil, too stock

DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
Harry Hill said it!

I concur wholeheartedly!

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
Wish I had words as beautiful as these

to comment on this one

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Why so serious ?---

as the Joker tells the Batman ; but alas Heath too has crossed this river into the Underworld !