Dear Jane.

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ABSTRUSE
ABSTRUSE
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Kinetic letters,
askew and independent,
becoming reborn in words,
settle themselves in cyberspace..

Trembling fingers press buttons
that create the vacuum,
as words inhale their first new breath
and speak to tear-filled eyes.

Innocent little assassins
cut right through her heart
and rip it from her chest.
“Look at us, you fool,”
they laugh.
“Honesty deceived you.”

They blow through the screen
as sand and sleet,
stinging her eyes.
Burning white saline rivulets
run down her face
splattering the keyboard,
as acid rain drops,

in time with her staccato breath
tapping away at the keys
until both are silent.

As death.

ABSTRUSE
ABSTRUSE
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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

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Harry LegHarry Legabout 18 years ago
Wow

I agree. You really must write more. This is fantastic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WRITE MORE POETRY

come on I wanna see more

aswirls

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
Wow

That one blew right through me with a roar. Devastating. Wonderful. Thank you. LJ

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