- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Dedicated To My Husband
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Dedicated To My Husband
The look in your eyes,
always makes me smile and blush.
Those tender loving eyes, blue,
with a hint of green.
You always tell me what I'm thinking.
Even before I have a chance to express my self.
You know my feelings, my desires, my dreams.
When I am wearing my tight red dress,
you follow me around the house.
You chase me, catch me, and caress me.
My love for you is eternal.
I will follow you till the end of the world.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoyour poem about you husband is expressive of the strong bond you enjoy between each other , well done and keep it up
DG Hearalmost 13 years agoI'm not a big reader of poems, probably because I can't write them but this one I could feel.
I liked it, I really did. It seemed so heartfelt and I could feel the emotion.
with respect
DG
hottchicalmost 13 years agoThe key thing for me is that the emotion is clear in your poetry.
Style in poerty is important, but I believe that emotion is more important.
