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Click hereHoney drip's
Like dew from a rose
Sweet muffled sigh's
Deep in her throat
Passion rising
Within her throe's
A taste of love
Only I know...
IMspidey/M.M. 9/07
Copyright © 2007
Re: feedback, you are welcome.
I submitted a poem on Saturday, so hopefully it will be up this week. Don't hold your breath, though - I'm no poet. I only wrote it because my fiction piece is taking longer than I thought to finish.
Regards,
Corpse_rider
This is nearly very good, but your poor grammar betrays the piece.You have given 'drips', 'sighs' and 'throes', all needless apostrophes, making them possessive. An apostrophe indicates either a possessive noun/pronoun, or indicates missing letters ie: she'd (she had). If the word is plural as in drips, sighs, and throes, no apostrophe is necessary.
Here endith the lesson.
All that aside, I like the poem.