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Click here-April 3, 04-
storm behind stones
horizon falling fast
running backwards
halls narrow
shoulders rub
ears burn, smell rubber
the penalty for love
never skinned knee
nor two, lose of limb
grin for the undertaker
his lean daughter
her pleasant pie eating mother
jingle, jingle aborted
shard of parking lot mercury vapors
graze our flattened faces
us in two places
us of turtles
me are you and you are me
upstairs copulation
noisy floors
could of done better
buck fifty coke classic
across whore hall
bills slip in easy, 4 bits as easy
off the bus route
gawk at the pickets
howl at sympathy
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I love the offbeat phrasing, the jingling shards of mercury vapor and turtles... very good.
jim : )