Dropped ball

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"I dropped the ball," said she
"No, I'm the one," said he
but neither knew
which one spoke true
so still it lays between

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QueenelizabethQueenelizabethover 10 years ago
I agree

Echoing what Maria said, well done in so few lines. Very profound and strong

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
This reminds me of the fabled Nawabs of Allahabad who would bow to one another

On the highway " after you , Jenaab !" & stand for hours insistin' the other Noble should precede him in a show of futile ( IMHO) courtesy !?!

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Lesse -

And when it is caught - Yep, I've been writing too much about that!

Maria2394Maria2394over 10 years ago
what a surprise!

It is short, well-written and rather profound. I truly enjoyed your poem and I have to say, thanks for making me smile. The ending was great :)

~ maria

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthor

Sooner or later there's got to be a catch.

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