- Erotic Poetry
- Eat me alive {Lovers' version}
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Click hereEat me alive.
Pull my hair ,and spread my thighs.
Bite my neck, as my back is bent.
Touch me till im dripping.
If im bad, please whip me.
My eyes will roll back.
As your body gives me an attack.
Use your nails to scron,
my body thats newly yours.
Yes oh dear lover Im begging,
for you to eat me alive.
Use your teeth to make me freak,
And we just might survive.
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- COMMENTS
MSTarotover 11 years agoI can see you have good tastes....or maybe it you like to taste? Either way there is a lot of teeth involved.Grin.
When I give comments I like to give a critique of a persons work to try and help them as a writer. I've said a few times it's the kind of comments I would like to get but never seem to.
Go slowly. There is no rush. If you have to put the poem or story aside for a few weeks before you post it. Then read back through it. Those miss spelled words will kind of almost jump out at you then.
The site will still be here, ready to crucify you. Smiles.
Or love you.
You will get a little of both.
So thicken the skin, put pen to paper or fingers to keyboards..chisel to stone.. whatever.
Have the courage to write badly. (Mark Twain)
Now if i can just follow my own advice.
M.S.Tarot
MarcelineTheVampireQueenover 11 years agoAuthorI spelled it wrong okay? I ment SCORN. Definition 3- A derisive or contemptuous action or speech. - Source,: Dictionary.com LOOK IT UP!
HarryHillover 11 years ago1. scron a guy that is weak, small, scrawny or varied combinations of those pitiful attributes. you can also say scronz for plural "What a scron that kid is" "too ...
2. The offspring of the Scron creature. Incredibly edgy around humans due to the torturous upbringing from the adult scron.
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must be a ms. or a weak alien ...5ed for sending me to the Donjon.
