- Non-Erotic Poetry
- eating crackers in bed ..
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in bed a girl
with blonde hair
who says she isn’t
really there ...
just a figment
my fanciful mind
the kind of girl
I sometimes find ...
beside me on
such sleepless nights
eating little tiny
bites ...
of my soul’s
crackers and cheese
lovely lady
eager to please ...
each and every
erotic desire
pour gasoline
on the fire ...
of my late-night
fantasies
words and actions
meant to tease ...
arouse me
through the dark of night
and gone, again
by morning’s light ...
- COMMENTS
normal jeanalmost 15 years agothis poem was better than I expected. There are a few places it could be tightened, in my opinion, you should lose the ellipses and shorten the line "little tiny" one or the other is too much.
The rhyme was not forced, it's simple but effective and the fact you didn't end rhyme is a good choice.
I enjoy reading you,
NJ
